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Replace “by Robert Townsend and starring Halle Berry Natalie Desselle and Martin Landau The film was written by Troy Byer and was her first screenplay” with “by Robert Townsend and starring Halle Berry Natalie Desselle and Martin Landau Two African American young women Berry Desselle that dream of a fabulous life move to Beverly Hills in which they are brought to the mansion of an elderly man Landau and experience glamour and prestige The film was written by Troy Byer and was her first screenplay”.

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